"I've got a theory about women," said Allan.
"Do tell," said Reg.
"All women hate me," said Allan. He lit a smoke. "They've made some sort of pact."
"You idiot."
"What?"
"That's not a theory," said Reg. "That's a hypothesis."
"You're red hot, you are."
"What?"
"I'm pouring my heart out here," said Allan, "and you pick on my grammar."
"It's not your grammar what's wrong; it's your choice of words."
"You never give, do you?"
"I consider myself to be most generous," said Reg, "but, if I'm right and you're wrong, I will not budge."
"Forget women; I need a theory about you."
"You mean a hypothesis?"
"You need to loosen up. You need to be kinder, and a bit more flexible; not so quick to jump on people."
"Jack be nimble, Jack be quick, Jack jump over the candlestick."
"You are certifiably insane."
"That's a theory."
This story was written with the inspiration of Three Word Wednesday Issue CXCII. The words are: budge, nimble and theory.
Wednesday, June 2, 2010
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6 comments:
I like it. Good, restrained imagery and vivid text.
you've do a wonderful job here with the words, they flow so easily in this. Great back-and-forth. Wonderful read.
Wonderful dialogues. I loved the pace!
Motivational speaking is a hogwash
Excellent dialogue and humor...love that ping-pong quality.
dialogue and pace are dynamite..i had to laugh out loud with theory and hypothesis...
Thanks all for your kind comments on this little scene.
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