Wednesday, January 6, 2010

To the Top

This is a six-sentence response to 3WW CLXXI. The words are epic, drain and nibble. I've cross-posted this to the 6S social site for comments over there.

I drink my beer and smile big as Steve, my boss, tells one of his epic tales of boating, fishing, drinking and womanising. I chuckle when required; scanning for waitresses bringing more beer or snacks. I drain my glass just in time for it to be replaced and nibble on what I've deduced is a battered, deep fried prawn. The price I pay for free alcohol and food is outrageous. Still, Steve's going all the way to the top, he says, and he's taking me with him. I dummy back to join the group behind me just in time to be served a dim-sim and laugh at one of the Accounts Manager's jokes.

Edit: "by glass" => "my glass".

8 comments:

  1. "The price I pay for free alcohol and food is outrageous."

    This right here says it all. I liked this.

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  2. Lots of truisms in this. To play along, that's a hard truth at the workplace. And you've captued it quite well.

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  3. I can relate to the uneasiness of retreating an unwelcome conversation several times a day, I enjoyed the style that you captured this awkwardness, and very smooth use of the words!

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  4. Guess we all pay a price for everything


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  5. And we all know what sort of jokes Accounts Managers tell. Nice, Bernard - I remember this sort of event from my days as an office worker (shudder).

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  6. You make an amusing fiction writer and in this piece have captured the ambiance perfectly. I can almost see the characters and situation. Great piece. Well done on the 6 sentences.

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  7. Love the picture here. The main character in the scene, but also outside of it. It would be interesting to hear the thoughts of the other attendees...

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