tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post3566433425285027947..comments2014-12-04T22:59:08.846-08:00Comments on Surge Bin: A More Gentle CreatureBernardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13194421719317300410noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-36278856049865901512010-07-18T18:03:50.279-07:002010-07-18T18:03:50.279-07:00I enjoyed this -- it was fast and sharp. Great dia...I enjoyed this -- it was fast and sharp. Great dialogue.<br /><br />I did wonder, however, if perhaps... she secretly prefers a man to be vulgar? If he's walked away, he'll never find out. ;)R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-27414793289968907272010-07-15T13:45:51.494-07:002010-07-15T13:45:51.494-07:00Thanks all for your kind comments. @Mr Wiswell: a...Thanks all for your kind comments. @Mr Wiswell: a lady cannot possibly stand for one that is vulgar, however gentle. Such is perhaps suited to the fish-seller's daughter and the parlour maid.Bernardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13194421719317300410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-46084461148325957242010-07-15T12:20:23.846-07:002010-07-15T12:20:23.846-07:00There is a flow to this that I find interesting, c...There is a flow to this that I find interesting, captivating. Very good read.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-73604081778193537452010-07-15T11:48:37.427-07:002010-07-15T11:48:37.427-07:00How about vulgar and gentle? I think I could swing...How about vulgar and gentle? I think I could swing that.<br /><br />Also enjoyed this, Bernard.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-70526934203640583622010-07-15T09:50:48.513-07:002010-07-15T09:50:48.513-07:00This one pulled me in right away; well-writtenThis one pulled me in right away; well-writtenMilo James Fowlerhttp://www.milo-inmediasres.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-17360154132074963282010-07-15T08:21:36.934-07:002010-07-15T08:21:36.934-07:00I like the dialog and the undertones of the two. ...I like the dialog and the undertones of the two. He is doing the right thing by looking for someone else. <br /><br />I enjoyed this alot, Bernard. <br /><br />-TimTimothy P. Remphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04422296532550497806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-76379216495754963572010-07-15T07:15:25.652-07:002010-07-15T07:15:25.652-07:00The woman comes across passive agressive to him, b...The woman comes across passive agressive to him, but it sounds like she needs to be.<br /><br />Nicely done, Bernard.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-62830811900193116582010-07-14T20:19:20.001-07:002010-07-14T20:19:20.001-07:00@Dee: I'm glad you had a "feeling" r...@Dee: I'm glad you had a "feeling" response. Funnily, though I wrote from his POV, I didn't actually like him: too arrogant.Bernardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13194421719317300410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2518099959262402617.post-52453808013000867282010-07-14T20:14:14.027-07:002010-07-14T20:14:14.027-07:00relationships and expectations! We are silly crea...relationships and expectations! We are silly creatures and manage to disappoint ourselves all the time. This was an interesting point of view and I admit I felt a bit sorry for him.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.com